In response to today’s one word prompt ” Phase“. π
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With a cup of coffee in her hand , she was sitting at her balcony , enjoying every moment of the first morning of the new year. Breathing in and out , she observed the tiny dew droplets on the leaf.
Staring into the empty spaces. She thought about life. Life that had been so ridiculous with her Β the last year. The unbearable pain , the unimaginable sufferings she had gone through . She thought about all the bad memories of that year. Her eyes watery by now.
She thought about the changes time has brought in her. She was lot more stronger this year. She thought how she overcame her fears , she has now realized the importance of time and family. She felt happy , confident while tears started to fall down her cheeks. She was ready to face the new phase with the smile on her face , hoping the coming time would heal her heart.
While going through pictures in her phone’s gallery , she paused at her photo. She still wasn’t used to being without her.Β Β
“Maa ” she cried as her mother’s photo on the phone’s screen smiled back at her.Β
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oh.. brought a shiver through my spine… so touching…
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Aw! Glad that you liked it π
Thank you so much π
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for a moment i felt like crying.. i can never imagine being away from my mother.. oh, shiver
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I know the feel… Its my real story.
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oh Dear!! I am so very sorry for your pain… now i am really going to cry.. oh, mothers!! they bring life to us and it is unimaginably hard to think otherwise…
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So true …
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Touching story…..
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Thank you so much π
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You’re welcome. π
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Keep the emotions flowing this way. Write all your heart says β€
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Thank you for reading π
Trying to do my level best… writing does make you feel little lighter π
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Touching and amazing story
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Thank you for reading and appreciating ππ
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Wow! It seriously pulled out my goosebumps.
Very touching….
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Thank you so much π means alot π
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I agree with the other comments, this gave me goosebumps. Powerful writing.
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Thank you so much for reading and appreciating π means alot π
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So beautifully written!!
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Thank you so much π
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Wow. I love this, I exactly know what feelings you were trying to project in this post. I have felt exactly the same when my father passed away. Keep on writing! π
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Oh ! M sorry for your loss π
Glad that you can connect…. thank you for readingπ
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My heart just shattered , just the same way I felt after my mothers demise.Very well written.
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Oh ! M sorry for the loss… I can feel your pain π
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Oh! That’s OK my dear that happened ten years back.Now I have kids of your age but at times I really miss her.Mother is a mother always,Cheers!
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Ten years back or a year back… memory never fades nor does the pain .
Mother is a mother always π so true
Cheers to you too π
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Thank you for appreciating π
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My pleasure π
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Loads of hugs to you Unnati…I’m sure your Mom is so very proud of you!!!
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Thank you so much π
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